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Nowadays fast food is a trend in many places and countries. Many believe that it is affecting our lifestyle and diet too much. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#food #trend #places #countries #lifestyle #diet
Yes i m agree with it if we talk about fast
food
 i know its looks good its taste is
also
 pretty good but in our diet it has so many health issue in the pakistan kfc has become most polpular seller in pakistan afcourse the taste struggles of kfc is good if we eat
this
 type of
food
 these
food
 have high fats
therefore
 it will create some fats in our body but in west culture people usually eat
such
 type of foods as lunch dinner whenever they want to east simply order and eat
this
food
 have no power because
this
 is make up very little floor so people will not get heathy life but in return when they came to the middle of the age so they feel weakness in the body may be weakness like housemade knee or eye sight issue mostly people have sex issue
this
 happen just of fast
food
 our internal system are used to
work
 hard so its required high died fost
food
 have spicy sauce and chemical in the
food
 which directly effect our body if we talk about
meat
 in fast
food
 normally these type of
meat
 is covered with
meat
 and freeze it with ice so they are not fresh
meat
 it can cause a heart diseae problem these all were the disadvantages of fast
food
 but
on the other hand
 we
also
 have advantages of fast
food
 it take less time to make burger or pizza hard
work
 is not required for making pizza usually oven or heat machines done
this
work
 simply we have to put material in over and oven will do his
work
 just in five minutes we carry it anywhere fast
food
 don t have smell so fast
food
 is good if we have two to three times in weak
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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