You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

BECKY! I just heard that you’re coming back to Manchester in the spring; is
this
really true?! I’ve missed you sooooooo much, you wouldn’t
believe
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Although
I’ve
also
heard that you are planning to get your own place in Stretford,
this
makes me less excited. I have been living on my own for six months now, and I can’t wait to get back into a house share or something. Living alone is just not for me, and I always thought that the days we lived together were the best. That’s why I’d like to propose that we start looking for a flat for the two of us. It would be cheaper than us both living apart, and we both have great jobs so we can afford a really big place with both of us there. Imagine a city centre apartment in a converted mill, three double bedrooms,
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massive living room! You know you want to! Your forever mate, Dave
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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