Companies spend millions each year on advertising online, in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need. What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism?
In
this
day and age, some companies
often invent their revenues in millions in advertisement
on social media. Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
Although
customers do not need these products, they may change their mind
after watching these adverts. Fix the agreement mistake
minds
This
essay will explore both positive
and negative impacts Correct article usage
the positive
on
consumerism.
On the one hand, some people reckon that an impressive advert which is shot by Change preposition
of
companies
may increase the willingness from
buyers. Change preposition
of
That is
to say, multinational companies
will collaborate with celebrities, their
endorsement may attract their fans to purchase. Correct word choice
and their
For instance
, Nike, a well-known sport
enterprise, invited a famous NBA player Kyrie Irving to endorse their basketball shoes Change the noun form
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then
shared the news on Correct word choice
and then
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Although
not all of his fans play basketball in person, 70% of them still felt compelled to buy it.
On the other hand
, other individuals may maintain that advertisement
may have Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
negative
influence on Add an article
a negative
environment
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the environment
In other words
, adverts are the faster approach to trigger impulse buying, however
, a wide range of customers feel remorse for commodities which may become garbage and harm the earth. China News reported that there were 75% of women bought cosmetics due to the adverts, nevertheless
, they regrated after purchasing. Furthermore
, the chemical materials and plastic packaging may be harmful to our earth.
In conclusion, companies
will always try their best to sell as much as their products. Although
advertisement
is a method to accomplish their goal, it has its own merits and demerits. It is our responsibility to be wise and buy the useful things that we really need. (256 words)Add an article
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