Companies spend millions each year on advertising online, in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need. What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism?

In
this
day and age, some
companies
often invent their revenues in millions in
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advertisements
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on social media.
Although
customers do not need these products, they may change their
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minds
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after watching these adverts.
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and negative impacts
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consumerism. On the one hand, some people reckon that an impressive advert which is shot by
companies
may increase the willingness
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buyers.
That is
to say, multinational
companies
will collaborate with celebrities,
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endorsement may attract their fans to purchase.
For instance
, Nike, a well-known
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enterprise, invited a famous NBA player Kyrie Irving to endorse their basketball shoes
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shared the news on
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Instagram.
Although
not all of his fans play basketball in person, 70% of them still felt compelled to buy it.
On the other hand
, other individuals may maintain that
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may have
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a negative
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influence on
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the environment
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.
In other words
, adverts are the faster approach to trigger impulse buying,
however
, a wide range of customers feel remorse for commodities which may become garbage and harm the earth. China News reported that there were 75% of women bought cosmetics due to the adverts,
nevertheless
, they regrated after purchasing.
Furthermore
, the chemical materials and plastic packaging may be harmful to our earth. In conclusion,
companies
will always try their best to sell as much as their products.
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is a method to accomplish their goal, it has its own merits and demerits. It is our responsibility to be wise and buy the useful things that we really need. (256 words)
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