During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter - remind him when and where you met - tell him what kind of job you are interested in - say why you think you would be suitable for the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Smith, I am Ada, and I met you on the flight from Newyork to London. It was very fortunate that I sat
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to you on
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flight. I enjoyed talking with you during the journey, and I was impressed by the introduction of International Rose
Restaurant
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. I graduated from Oxford College with a major in marketing. After graduation, I
have
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worked in the
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marketing
makerting
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marketing
department
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Garden
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for 5 years. I got promoted to the
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assistant
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assistant
director of the marketing department
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year. I am interested in the manager position
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the International Rose
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. I consider myself
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a suitable candidate for
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job, as I have vast experience in marketing and I am
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familiar with
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restaurant
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business.
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, I can speak fluent English, Chinese, and German. International Rose Restaurants have branches over the world,
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my language skills can facilitate me to communicate with clients from different countries. I would be grateful
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if you could offer me an opportunity to work in the International Rose
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. I am available for a job interview in the
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few weeks. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Ada
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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