In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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concerning the past
of
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properties
are
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increasing by their dwellers in
the
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some parts of the world. There are a
couple
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reason
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involved in
this
controversial issue and
also
some ways which could be used to
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fined
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proper
information
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history. In fact, there are several reasons concerning
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tendency
for
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the history of places they live.
Initially
, and maybe
the
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most important
is
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the value of a dwelling
could
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be
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affected
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effected
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by its past.
For
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some things
such
as the past
house
owners or the architecture of the
house
has
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a significant effects
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on its price. Resulting to
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, some are likely to spend more money
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this
type of
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. The
second
reason is that
,
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house
history searching gives extra
information
about it.
Information
like previous ownership documents
,
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and the materials that a
house
comprised of would be valuable for most
people
. In
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place, nowadays, there are prohibitions for some materials which
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to
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in houses,
also
people
maybe become the victim of a fraud case, if they do not have enough details about past ownership documents of a
house
.
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, these problems put new buyers
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the
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risk of
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money or extra charge. It is possible to access past
house
records in a number of ways. The most important and trustable way is the document held on the municipals of each city or its districts.
Moreover
, thanks to
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of new technology,
people
can search
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everything on
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.
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to that, in some
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people
, especially elderly ones who have
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in
a
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same
neighborhood
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have valuable
information
in
this
regard. In conclusion,
people
in some
country
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countries
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are more willing to know about their housing past in order to know about the real value of their property and eliminate the probability risk of
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their
asset
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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