You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain Why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

Dear Ram, Hope

this

letter finds you and your family in radiant health. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the sale of my personal

television

. The reason for selling is that my wife got a wonderful opportunity to work in London so we are migrating to a new place within 20 days. I am aware that you are looking for a

television

to buy so thought to inform you about

this

. It's a LED

Television

brand sony purchased in August

Last

year.

This

magnificent machine is built upon smart technologies which have Bluetooth,USB, and WIFI features and is very rare to get in the Sony brand under

this

segment.

This

Device hold 5 yrs warranty. The powerful sound quality of

television

makes the cult watching experience.

Moreover

This

device can be used as an extended monitor with a laptop for official work.

Although

, The radio feature is not activated yet we can start after requesting an overcall to the service centre.

This

television

is a special edition launched on the 70th Anniversary of the brand. I would like to invite you to my house on 26th August to have a look at the

television

and we will

also

get a chance to spend some leisure time with a variety of delicious and healthy meals.I hope you will visit soon. Best Wishes, Rahil Kumar

Submitted by info.rahil on Sat Aug 20 2022

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