A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/ she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Zoe, I am writing

this

letter to give you my advice on your comping holding for the fists time on coming summer.

To begin

with, I reckon, you should go on a camping holiday as you have never had

this

kind of holiday in your life.

Moreover

, I assert that you will enjoy it since

this

is your

first

-time camping and can release your stress. But I would like to give suggestions to prepare for your holiday in order to bring your essential medicines or other necessary things

such

as ten or to bring enough food. To be honest with you,

although

I really want to go with you and I know that we will have a great time since we have not seen each other since

last

year, I have to take care of my mother as she got an accident and her left wrist was broken.

Therefore

, I am unable to join to go camping with you

this

summer

nevertheless

I would like to join with you. Looking forward to hearing from you about your tip soon. Warm Regards Sandar Myint

Submitted by sandarmyint740 on Sat Aug 20 2022

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7 paragraphs

184 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
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