Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to the younger). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued by some, that high schools ought to run

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mandatory

programmes

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for

students

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to serve

community

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the community

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in different ways according to their talents or strength areas,

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as assessing

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youngsters

with their learning or even planting trees to improve the

neighborhood

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.

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I do not totally agree with the compulsory part of

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suggestion,

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I find

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myself

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inclind

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inclined

to admit that the

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benefits

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benefits

would certainly improve the local communities very much. The

first

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reason to advocate

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idea is that

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programmes

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would certainly

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strengthen

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strengthen

the solidarity of the community, In the sense that

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every

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every

member will participate to fill the gaps of weakness. A good example to illustrate

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could be the internal leadership

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that some private schools in the UAE have run during the past few years, it has aimed to utilize the knowledge of high grades student to teach

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the younger

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student to achieve better learning and prepare the

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to be

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responsible

citizens in the future. Another point to consider is that giving

students

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at

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age ancillary duties alongside their primary ones would help them in

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different

ways

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as learning how to manage their

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, taking responsibilities to achieve a given task to them,

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all of the aforementioned

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merits

, the

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of these young

students

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will be filled with useful things rather than being exposed to peers

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pressure

and getting involved in

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activities or crime.

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, we should understand that

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extracurricular activities may not

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all parents as some would prefer their kids to spend their free

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with

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studying

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studying

another language or even

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sport

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or music. Some may refuse for safety reasons as their kids are secured and

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monitored

within school premises but outside the

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they may get injured or exposed to other harmful things. To

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recapitulate

, the aforementioned points highlighted clearly the reasons behind my agreement with

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programmes

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and at the same

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time

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the essay indicated the possible excuses which could be used by some parents who prefer their kids to focus on their

study

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and shift these volunteer activities for later after their graduation.