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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

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Yes, I completely agree with it. Nowadays, the
government
 is spending a lot of money on unnecessary schemes.
Instead
 of that, if they use that amount in addressing the problems of the
people
, we can see a better state. I am staying in Andhra Pradesh now. here the
government
 is not concentrating on unemployment. is not concentrating. All the educated
people
 are moving to other states to find
a suitable jobs
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 for them. Nowadays education quality is
also
 not good. If the
government
 concentrate on the quality of education
then
 children's
future
 will be good. The
government
 is promising the
people
 that they will implement a number of things but when it comes to the actual picture just they are keeping those promises in records ,not in implementation.
Firstly
government
 need to understand where the public is facing the problems, like roads,electricity,taxes, transportation etc. If all these things are good in one state
then
 they can invest the amount in building statues or some other necessary schemes.
People
 should need to choose the right person for the right position
then
 only we can see a better
future
.
Government
people
 are becoming very commercial. Some
people
 are taking bribes from poor
people
 for land registration or for  sanctioning
the
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loans etc. If they are doing their duty perfectly
then
 the public is not going to face
this
 kind of issue. The
government
 is following some useless schemes. Everyone needs to think about our
future
 and we have to raise the issue whatever we are facing to the
government
. In my point of view if the
government
 is good
then
 we can better state,
better
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a better
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 country and
better
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a better
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future
.
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