Some people think that a huge a mount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The importance of protecting wild animals has become increasingly important than ever.
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many countries spend a lot to protect
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wildlife, some think it is a complete waste and
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governments
government
goverments
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governments
should use those budgets for the betterment of the people. In my perspective, I completely disagree with
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statement because we are responsible for bringing them closer to their extinction and losing
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their
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their
lands,
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it is our duty to protect them so they can live another day.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem balance
  • natural habitats
  • conservation
  • sustainable development
  • ecotourism
  • poverty alleviation
  • underprivileged
  • moral obligation
  • environmental awareness
  • long-term investment
  • natural world
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