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All high school students should be encouraged to take part in community service programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#school #students #part #community #service #programs
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It is often argued that service programs should be helped by teenagers. I strongly agree with
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 as all of them would be benefited from that action. The following paragraphs will highlight the benefits based on my opinion and some relevant examples.
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 of all, the
services
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 of the communities are essential,
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 as recycling, planting trees, and collecting rubbish from the parks and beaches. Raising young people in
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environment
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 is mega important for them and their futures as well as for the
community
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.
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, a
school
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 that supports recycling actions will be encouraging
students
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 and teaching them the importance of it.
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, when adults, they will continue helping to keep the natural
environment
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.
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, the
school
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 should give activities involving
community
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services
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.
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,
students
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' actions would
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 benefit the
community
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. Some places do not have many volunteers participating in the program and the government can not afford assistants. In
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 case, if the
students
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 take part in the
services
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, the actions to increase a better
environment
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 would be dramatically improved.
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, a
school
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 in a particular
school
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 in Rio de Janeiro took all the
students
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 to each one plant a three.
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, years later the
community
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 had over 1500 threes planted. For that reason, it is so important the involvement the
students
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 with
services
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 programs. To conclude, in my opinion, the
students
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 from high
school
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 should take part in communities
services
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 programs as it would increase the
environment
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 and
also
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 change their lifestyle, helping the
next
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 generation.
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