Police in some countries like England don't carry guns. Some people don't approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant examples and experiences.

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, means one has to be guided with its' pieces of equipment in order to protect lives and properties when the need arises. Why
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people believe that an officer with firearms portrays safety in the lives of individuals, others feel it reduces the
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rate in society. In
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, the essence of building a
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board in any country or society is for them to protect
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lives and properties of every individual. and fight against criminals that litigate nuisance. For ,example, in a
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situation there's an arm robbery attack or conflict going on, around a particular neighbourhood a police officer with his gun can create peace by the mere sight of his gun.
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, an officer who parades within a dangerous path unknown to him could be attacked if he has no functional device to defend himself.
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, civilians will respect
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at the mere sight ,but if the public gets to know that
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do not carry their devices
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scenes will be of increase.
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, in a case whereby a school is
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just like what happened in Texas where the
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in charge had no gun to bridge the attacker from getting into the school premises which resulted in the loss of youngsters and three teachers.
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, possession of firearms by
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agencies gives people a sense of belonging and confidence to go about their daily activities without fear of the unknown,
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reducing
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percentage.
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, in an incident that I experienced while returning from work at late hours of the night unknown to me that I boarded
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wrong vehicle I only realized that when we got to the checkpoint where the
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on duty asked everyone to alight, serious searching was carried out and lots of dangerous weapons were discovered. With ,
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my life was saved
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the other innocent ones. In conclusion, possession of firearms by police
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is pivotal to society.
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will help to reduce
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rates and protect people from dangers ,
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, developing a sense of belonging.
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