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day ,a highly controversial issue

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whether the

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celebrations

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many budgets by the communities ,

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many people believe that official authorities who have the authority in any

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and I will support

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relevant examples.

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with, in recent

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with the development of globalization nations become tend to charge a

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of budgets to celebrate

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the events like national

days

.The main reason for

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many crowds

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that

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play a crucial role to strengthen the loyalty of the citizens, so they engaged in many traditional dances which

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to identify

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their civilization through

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type of

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.

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celebrations

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way to bond the relationship between the citizens .

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activity

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in which all

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can share to express

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their love toward their land.

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, the holding of festivals

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national

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others around the world

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, many folks view that the government should hinder

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their

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their

money

in

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celebrations

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to improve like

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frustration which is more

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to achieve the best life for the communities.

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individuals with

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good frustration and amenities can reach

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the

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happiness

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because it

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to

grow

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the

the

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countries

.

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country

become a good example on

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concertation

of achieving the boost of any

country

.

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of folks confess that the improvement of value things can help to create

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atmosphere among the

countries

.people feel that

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attention

on

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some worthy issue can serve all humans .

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when they focus on the amenities which bring

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pleasure

for

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the nations To conclude, it is thought that the

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holding

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holding

many

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may regard

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way in which societies west their money to do

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of activities , so a

lot

of

bielvers

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believers

admit that the government must do various worthy to benefit their humans .In my opinion, I completely agree with the importance of achieving some values and worthy things which may bring warfare for the individuals .