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Advantages and disadvantages of educating boys and girls in the same class at schools.

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Although
boys
 and
girls
 study at separate
schools
 in traditional countries, there are a lot of mixed-
gender
schools
 where
boys
 and
girls
 are educated in the same
class
 in many countries .
This
 kind of school has both advantages and drawbacks. I will discuss both in
this
 paper. There are many advantages to educating
boys
 and
girls
 in the same
class
 at school. One of them is more preparation to be in society. As we know in real life, men and women are together. They should be able to communicate and work with each other. In the mixed
gender
schools
,
boys
 and
girls
 study and do their exercises together. in fact, their school is a small community. So, they prepare for their real life in future. The
next
 one is
gender
 equality. When
boys
 and
girls
 are educated in the same environment, it means that they have similar educational conditions.
For example
, they have the same teachers, laboratories and teaching methods.
Hence
, they learn there is no difference between males and females.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 some drawbacks to educating
boys
 and
girls
 in the same
class
. At
first
, it can lead to a series of sexual problems. Nowadays, children are conscious and have information about everything. They know the
gender
 differences between males and females. it is possible that Some of them be naughty. So, they may harass their opposite sex with sexual jokes or movements.
This
 problem is more common in
third
-world countries.
Moreover
, controlling students in mixed-
gender
schools
 is more difficult than in single-
gender
schools
. When
boys
 and
girls
 are together, they have more challenges for their teachers. They make a lot of noise.
Thus
, teachers should spend more time controlling them. In summary, studying
boys
 and
girls
 in the same
class
 has many benefits and problems. More readiness to be in the real world and
gender
 equality are its benefits. The disadvantages are sexual problems and the harder control of students.
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