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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian Magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-years old Child. Write a letter to the parents, in your letters • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir I am writing
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 letter in reference to your advertisement for the position of caretaker for your 6-year-old kid. I am currently working in Swiss for an Irish family taking care of their two
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. I was unaware of how rewarding it is to take care of
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 before I took the job. As an enthusiastic and friendly person, I get along well with the
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 and would love to spend time with them. I have an experience of 10 years of caretaking similar age group
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 and I can
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 assist them with their studies. I am a trainer painter and I can teach the
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 the art of painting and craft making. I have good culinary skills and I pay special attention to the health of the
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 and the family. As a traveller-loving person, I would like to travel to different parts of the world and explore the culture. I would like to spend my free time surfing with the locals and master my painting skill. I can
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 get a reference letter from my current employer if needed. I look forward to hearing from you. yours sincerely Hari Vignesh
Submitted by t.harivignesh on

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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