You have seen an advertisement in an Australian Magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-years old Child. Write a letter to the parents, in your letters • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir I am writing

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letter in reference to your advertisement for the position of caretaker for your 6-year-old kid. I am currently working in Swiss for an Irish family taking care of their two

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. I was unaware of how rewarding it is to take care of

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before I took the job. As an enthusiastic and friendly person, I get along well with the

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and would love to spend time with them. I have an experience of 10 years of caretaking similar age group

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and I can

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assist them with their studies. I am a trainer painter and I can teach the

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the art of painting and craft making. I have good culinary skills and I pay special attention to the health of the

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and the family. As a traveller-loving person, I would like to travel to different parts of the world and explore the culture. I would like to spend my free time surfing with the locals and master my painting skill. I can

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get a reference letter from my current employer if needed. I look forward to hearing from you. yours sincerely Hari Vignesh

t.harivigneshSun Aug 21 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think it is important to wpend on roads and highways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or diagree?

Many government spend a lot of money on art. Some people think this investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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