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Many governments in the world spend large amounts of money on art which helps to develop quality in people’s life. However, governments should spend money on other things rather than art. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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Arts
 play an important role in everybody's life. Some communities believe that
government
 should invest more in
arts
 to develop
people
's lifestyles while other communities argue with
this
 matter and say that it is important to focus on other issues rather than
arts
 to increase the quality of
people
's life. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both scenarios and
then
 I will give my opinion on
this
 matter. On the one side,
Arts
 like paintings, designing, etc are one's own talent.
Arts
also
 have their own importance to develop the
nation
's values.
For example
, India is the greatest
nation
 which has different cultures in different regions. Through , art
people
 express their feelings and emotions. Folk
arts
 have a great demand in India. These folk
arts
 have their own unique style and they are like wall paintings
,
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 and calendar paintings.
Government
 should support
arts
 to develop the
nation
's
arts
 which have their own significant value. On the other side, around the world other than
arts
 there are various
problems
 which have a great impact on society.
Government
 should focus on
people
's
problems
 like transportation
problems
, etc which is helpful to all
people
.
For example
, Hyderabad is the capital of the Indian states of Telangana and Andhra Pradesh. It is a city with multiculturalism where there is a huge population. Here, there are huge traffic
problems
. So, the
government
 developed subway lines like metro stations to avoid traffic. Another good example is, the Singapore
government
 focused on the development of the education system. Now it is the place to provide free primary education to children. To sum up, In my ,view both
arts
 and
problems
 in society have their own importance. But I agree with the latter statement because the
nation
's economic position is weak so it is better to focus on other
problems
 related to
people
 rather than the
arts
.
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