Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As society is advancing by leaps and bounds, the attitude

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adopt toward economic evolution has undergone a noticeable and far-reaching transformation. Under

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circumstance, an absolute consensus is hardly reached as to whether governments should put economic development play the most vital role or improve other kinds of development equally for their own

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essay, an objective analysis of

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argument will be made, followed by my opinion. On the one hand, some harbour the belief that a developed

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is the scale to measure a

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's success. Many studies have shown that

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it is invisible the majority of

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's living conditions have improved significantly and demands in human hierarchical needs are satisfied in developed countries compared to the undeveloped.

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, it will be a grave mistake to overlook the fact that concentrating on improving the

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can provide a lot of jobs and income for the citizens which is the shortest way for a

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to develop in the fast pace of

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in the modern day.

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, in 1995 Vietnam started to open trading with neighbouring countries and those in different places around the world which gained a huge change over the past 2 decades. From

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on, the

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condition of Vietnamese improved dramatically which led to the escape from long-lasted poverty.

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example is the illustration of the fact that economic progress can be the most crucial target for

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the development of a

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.

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, the counter-argument raised by objectors is that other factors are

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imperative to consider in sustaining a

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belief could be attributed to the fact that

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need to be well-rounded, which is

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important to cope with the perfect

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in other countries where culture, art, medication, and education are all well developed.

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, not only the

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needs to be focused to improve but

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the

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should be aware.

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, Japan is a

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which developed rapidly in all aspects from the movie industry,

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, construction, and education to fashion,

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well spread all around the world,

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, it ranked top 2 in the most developed

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. From

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example, one can observe that other kinds of progress

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play an integral part in building up a

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. To summarize, in the light of the analysis mentioned above, I side with the stance of the latter for the larger extent economic improvement is not enough to develop a

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perfectly. The government should enhance other factors to have a happy society in the fast pace of

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