Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?

Due to advancement in technology, there

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been tons of changes being done in the old

cities

. Many of the old

cities

are undergoing major changes to adapt

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new technologies. There are many advantages and disadvantages of

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trend. The main benefit of modifying the old

cities

is to improve the different facilities. There are many areas where advancement was needed and which is only possible because of the modern buildings and latest

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.

For example

, in old

cities

there were no good medical facilities,

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have to travel

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cities

. So, now they don’t need to go somewhere and

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in good health

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the

people

.

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modernization children can avail the

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education in their remote areas and

this

will lead to

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better future.

On the other hand

, there are cons too, the main problem is pollution. With the modernization many industries have been set up for

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growth and change,

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leads to many types of pollution.

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,

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industry put its waste in

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river

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, which ultimately

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the river.

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modernization

people

become more

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and which causes the loss of their culture and traditional values. To put it in a nutshell,

people

should enjoy the modern era but they should know where to draw the line and should not cross it.

Otherwise

, it will cause detrimental

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