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The internet has become so efficient and popular that many people rely on it for learning. Some suggest that it could replace the use of books as the main source of knowledge for education. Do you support or oppose the opinion? Explain your position.

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 has already become widely spread in our life. Modern society can’t even imagine a life without communication, sharing photos, possibility to obtain any material online. Some people consider
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sources
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 as the only for extend their knowledge and horizon. I suppose it is significant to use confirmed
sources
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 of information
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 as books and
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 articles. There is an enormous number of minds, tutorials and books on the Net. Part of them is awesome and the authors put huge efforts into preparation. On the one hand,
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 is a choice that everybody has.
On the other hand
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, the quality of
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sources
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 is poor enough. What’s more, it became more difficult to find appropriate information in tons of things.
As a result
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, we should prepare a list of bookmarks we usually use for search.
Moreover
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, we already use applications that allow us to find the thing in stored bookmarks of the browser.
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,
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 resources did not pass reviews by skilled specialists which might prove or disprove the reliability of origin.
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, materials could contain unverified data or even unscientific minds.
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, there are a lot of people who follow the studies about flat Earth etc.
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, the
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 is already in competition with printed books. We can’t escape from contemporary technologies, so we should participate in the process of mixing different types of information – as electronic as printed ones.
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, we have to be aware of what source is relevant and confirmed to make a correct selection of
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.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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