Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people rely on inventing a
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fringe
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foreign
language for international communication.
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describe
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and negative sides.
Biligual
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people
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able to
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enhance
soft skills and open another point of view of the world. The
first
reason is
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conversation with people from
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foreign
contries
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countries
suddenly
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soft skills. The
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different languages have different sides of the understanding around us.
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, learning other
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tongue
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tongues
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neuron
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between brain cells.
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,
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communication
comminucation
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communication
with
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foreigners
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stressful
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stressful
and
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to switch to tounges.
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, going out from the
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discomfort,
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progress
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progress
and
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concentration
.
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, switching from one to
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during the thinking process.
For example
, to make dialogue with someone person may turn all thinking and speaking skills
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tongue
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learning
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learning
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language
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two opposite sides. According to
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above advantages of inventing in
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foreign
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disadvantages
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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