The growth of online shopping will one-day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or dis agree?

In

this

, recent times, advancement in the

use

of technology keeps growing. The question of, if the increase in online shopping could lead to the shutting down of shops in local and urban areas is really a debatable issue. I totally agree with

this

aforementioned statement for the following reasons. The world keeps changing for the best every day, since the advent of technology certain areas in our lives have improved. Life has been easier, more convenient and accessible for purchasing and rendering goods and services to

people

.

Firstly

, the

use

of technology has made work ,especially in the agriculture sector easily and less stressful with the

use

of modern equipment

such

as tractors, and other machines which could be used in farming. The

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of

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mobile device is quite alarming both the elderly and youths has gone digital. The idea of online shopping keeps increasing per day , due to

some

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individual nature of work most

people

do find it so difficult to enter the shopping mall or local market to purchase their basic needs , rather they channel their means of getting it through online shopping and to make things easier and convenient those items are being brought to them at their door post and payment is done through online banking unlike the shopping mall or local market where one has to stand on a long queue waiting to be attended.

Secondly

, considering the rate of traffic jams in most areas

for example

in a city like Lagos state where there are lots of population , they tend to face challenges commuting freely. With

this

, most groups living in that area will feel scared stocking themselves in

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such

traffic situations.

In addition

, online shopping display lots of varieties for

people

to make choices and

also

, and individuals go through reviews to know how satisfactory their products are before purchasing them. Due to the competition involved most brands try to give out good quality products in other to maintain a high profile.

Furthermore

, with the inflation going on,

country's

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economy has affected the price of most things including shop renting,

therefore

people

channelled their products online for companies to see and patronize them.

Also

, interns of perishable foods, chemicals can be used to preserve them for consumption. To sum up, online shopping is easier, convenient and accessible.

also

, one does not have to go through the stress of purchasing items from local

market

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or shopping

mall

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after the daily hustle and bustle of work.