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The of International and the percentage of UK students gaining second class degrees or better at a major Uk uneversity

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of international and the percentage of
UK
 students
obtain
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second class
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 degrees or better at a major
UK
 university. Overall, it is perfectly clear that in different areas of subject students had non-identical statistics.
First
 and foremost, the vast majority of international enlistment hold information technology approximately 85
percent
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 at the same time significantly dissimilar from
UK
admission
 it was 56
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.
However
, International
admission
 had a good degree in electrical information practically at the same level as information technology certainly 80
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 whereas the figure for home
admission
 was 60%.
In addition
,
UK
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 and international recruitment had the same proportions in terms of nursing and accountancy which were about three quarters and 60%.
Moreover
,
UK
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 had
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good statistic in sociology and art history which were about 80%
for
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 comparison with international
admission
 where it
were
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 70% and 78
percentage
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.
Besides
, home
admission
 hold English literature and international
law
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 were 75% and 70% where International
admission
lower
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about
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 20
percent
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 than
of
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UK
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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