Borrowing Money from afriend can harm or damage the friendship

Borrowing
money
from friends may have negative effects as well as positive effects. It depends on
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attitude
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attitute
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attitude
of
giver
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friend and receiver
one
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. In
further
paragraphs
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i
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will discuss how
borrowing
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the borrowing
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process affects
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the relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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.
Firstly
we discuss
negative
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the negative
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consequences
consquences
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consequences
of borrowing
money
. Suppose Ram borrows
money
from Sham for
period
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a period
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of time, but he
unable
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is unable
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to return
money
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the money
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on time that makes
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a negative
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impact on
the
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mind of Sham. That
incidence
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put
negative
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a negative
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impact on their friendship.
Eventually
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both will start
eshchewing
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eschewing
each other. For some reason
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their
thier
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their
friendship does not end
then
also
negative
consequence
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consequences
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are there. Ram can't ask for
money
for any other emergency. There are
also
positive effects of borrowing
money
. Suppose
neelu
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need
borrows
money
from
salman
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for the operation of his father . Because of
this
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their friendship bond becomes
more
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stronger than ever. Salman has
also
kind
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a kind
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of
satisfied
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feeling. In conclusion there arene
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