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The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#road #transport #goods #drivers #test #year
The famous quote “practice makes a man perfect”, points out the importance of every individual to work on
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themselves
themselve
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themselves
 regularly.Designated people riding on cycles,
bykes
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bikes
,trucks and other vehicles and delivering parcels and goods have
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 responsibility of delivering intact items safely.According to my opinion,it is very essential to check
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 ability and
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progress
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progress
 over an estimated time period religiously as
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 will explain.
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,
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 trust
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 the drivers delivering goods
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 their customers is mandatory,many
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 regarding broken products and wrong items have increased nowadays.Transportation of essential goods both official and personal is an extremely noble business.
Complaince
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Compliance
 in quality and punctuality during shipment must be the
principle
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 pillars of
such
 industries.Good packaging
as well as quicker & safer servicing in boxes
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 is necessary in
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 to impress the customers. Licensed skilled drivers must be extremely efficient while performing their duty and must be capable of transferring the correct parcel to the correct person.
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 they
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must
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must
 always be on time in
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 to satisfy the buyers.
As a result
,some regular assessments are required in
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 to examine the productivity and efficacy of a driver.Bigger companies including Blue Dart,UPS,
DHL
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 conduct
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 inspections trimonthly or annually in
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 to check the performance of the faithful workers working under them.
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,maintaining the quality of the full shipment process starting from when it got dispatched till the time it reaches
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the informed person is very essential.It increases
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 the product and exponentially improves the courier business.
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