The internet market has become an important source for most
of
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daily
needs. While Add an article
the daily
the
online technology is developing much, Many consumers prefer to buy most of their needs online. I believe that Internet shopping is saving much money and Correct article usage
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time
. The effects and the online marketing trend will be explained in the following lines.
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on
, Online shopping is important nowadays because it helps people to Change preposition
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safe
much Replace the word
save
time
and money, while they are choosing their daily needs. Use synonyms
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many parents used to spend a much Add a comma
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time
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necessity
for their children. Fix the agreement mistake
necessities
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this
contemporary epoch Linking Words
guardians
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,guardians
they
can finish shopping even while they are at work break. Correct pronoun usage
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, Everyday boys and girls need water, sandwiches, fruits and vegetables for Linking Words
the
school, Correct article usage
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although
the parents Linking Words
working
, they care about buying all these items which could take a long Wrong verb form
work
of
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time
to care about without the internet. Add an article
a time
Hence
we can say that Linking Words
online
market is much useful for families.
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the online
Moreover
, some men and women are enjoying to safe money and Linking Words
time
by using Use synonyms
the
modern websites to buy daily needs. it Correct article usage
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have
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has
really
good effect on the environment. The Add an article
a really
less
people use cars, It will help to keep the level of Change the quantifier
fewer
the
pollution low. Correct article usage
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Therefore
, Linking Words
what
can be said that online shopping is Correct pronoun usage
it
helping
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a helping
environment
.
In conclusion, online shopping makes Add an article
the environment
buyers
life easier. After Change noun form
buyers'
buyer's
this
essay has shown the effects and how it became a trend, I can say that old school families have to think about how to start using Linking Words
the
modern buying ways. I’m convinced that every family has to look around to see how Correct article usage
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the
modern life developing.Correct article usage
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