You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
There is an ongoing
debates
between Change the noun form
debate
quality
of Add an article
the quality
work
and professional appearance
. Some organisation
think that Fix the agreement mistake
organisations
dress
appropriately is a necessity to maintain Replace the word
dressing
smart
working Correct article usage
a smart
appearance
. While,
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apply
the
others think that it does not matter as long as the employee produces Correct article usage
apply
high quality
Add a hyphen
high-quality
work
.
Let's start with dress
smartly. In my opinion, there are some specific Wrong verb form
dressing
jobs
where your appearance
is critical. For example
, appearance
matters in client-facing
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a client-facing
the client-facing
job
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jobs
such
as lawyers and consultants. Lawyer
and Fix the agreement mistake
Lawyers
consultant
typically represent high-network individuals and multinational corporations, in which the environment requires them to Fix the agreement mistake
consultants
dress
appropriately. It is also
common for lawyers and consultants to attend meetings, conferences or formal dinners where formal
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a formal
dress
code is usually compulsory. On
some extreme cases, your Change preposition
In
appearance
sometimes are
considered as part of your value, e.g. wearing Change the verb form
is
expensive
watch is considered as being successful.
For Add an article
an expensive
the expensive
another type
of Fix the agreement mistake
other types
jobs
that are not client-facing and quite flexible, I do not think that these job
put high emphasis on Change the determiner
this job
these jobs
appearance
. For example
, some jobs
such
as content creator and web developer. These type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
jobs
usually allow employees to work
remotely, which also
serves as part of job benefits and perks. In that case, those who are Correct your spelling
working
workiing
in these fields do not face the hassle of thinking Correct your spelling
working
what
to wear on the weekdays. There are quite a number of stories from web developers who like wearing Change preposition
about what
pajamas
while working!
To concludeChange the spelling
pyjamas
with
, I think context matters when analysing these two opinions. Personally, I think the type of Change preposition
apply
work
, either client facing or not, is essential to consider whether dress
smartly or work
quality is more important.Submitted by shaden.kaabneh on
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