You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There is an ongoing
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between
quality
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of
work
and professional
appearance
. Some
organisation
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organisations
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think that
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appropriately is a necessity to maintain
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working
appearance
. While
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others think that it does not matter as long as the employee produces
high quality
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work
. Let's start with
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smartly. In my opinion, there are some specific
jobs
where your
appearance
is critical.
For example
,
appearance
matters in
client-facing
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a client-facing
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job
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jobs
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such
as lawyers and consultants.
Lawyer
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and
consultant
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consultants
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typically represent high-network individuals and multinational corporations, in which the environment requires them to
dress
appropriately. It is
also
common for lawyers and consultants to attend meetings, conferences or formal dinners where
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dress
code is usually compulsory.
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some extreme cases, your
appearance
sometimes
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considered as part of your value, e.g. wearing
expensive
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an expensive
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watch is considered as being successful. For
another type
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other types
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of
jobs
that are not client-facing and quite flexible, I do not think that
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put high emphasis on
appearance
.
For example
, some
jobs
such
as content creator and web developer. These
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of
jobs
usually allow employees to
work
remotely, which
also
serves as part of job benefits and perks. In that case, those who are
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working
workiing
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working
in these fields do not face the hassle of thinking
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to wear on the weekdays. There are quite a number of stories from web developers who like wearing
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while working! To conclude
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, I think context matters when analysing these two opinions. Personally, I think the type of
work
, either client facing or not, is essential to consider whether
dress
smartly or
work
quality is more important.
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