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in many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend

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Nowadays, it is impossible to not
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 any changes in both traditions and cultures. One and the most conspicuous of them is the size of modern
families
 which has changed drastically. In my point of across, it has not only
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 but
also
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 which will be scrutinized in
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accordingly
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Firstly
, a few centuries ago people used to have extended
families
 and it truly helped them in that
time
 in terms of work
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.
Nevertheless
, the requirements of
modern
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 world are now different
in
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compered
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 to
past
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. To clarify, due to advances in technology, a vast
major
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job
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 are digital and do need any human force.
Additionally
,
currently
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the
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life has become extremely busy and demandable which attributes
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 not sufficient spare
time
 to look after their babies meticulously. Owing to that,
small
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 family is an auspicious choice for each of us.
Furthermore
, in lieu of not being able to treat each child equally which is really anomalous, it would be much better to have one and take care of him or her relatively well. By the means of that, the bond of members at one home will be much stronger than in large
families
On the other hand
,
besides
 its mentioned con it may
also
 have a mighty pro, respectively.
For example
, if there are
a
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plenty of members in
families
, they may have a lot of fun with each other.
Moreover
, in
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 as parents will be older and lose some physical abilities, in that
time
 they will have a great chance to get
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 their all children every
time
.
Thus
, there is no problem for them in terms of being alone when they are
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. To sum up, after taking into consideration all possible aspects which can affect our notion
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this
 statement, it is clear that having less
time
 for each child may strongly enervate the link between them.
Nonetheless
,
but
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for
this
, older people might have
less
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 opportunities to be cared
by
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 their children.
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