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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learna foreign language. discuss both views and give your own opinion

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The knowledge they say is 'power'. It has been a debatable issue over why foreign languages are learnt by folks. some groups think that the main purpose of studying a white man's language is for job employment and travelling opportunities while others believe there is more to
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, acquiring knowledge by
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 depends on
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's purpose. Other reasons could include education, a business transaction
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 as the exchange of goods and services , and maintaining diverse relationships with other foreign
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. With the way globalisation is growing day by day, learning in a foreign country broadens
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's knowledge and strengthens their horizons of life.
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, due to the poor learning facilities in some
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 , individuals especially the elderly decide to send their wards to foreign nations in other to learn. Again, the growth of a nation depends on the economic standard.
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, the Exchange of goods and services increases the growth of not just the country's economy but inter-relationship nationwide.
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 acquire foreign languages in other to migrate either for work or basically becomes an habitant.
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, in
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 recent times, unemployment has been on the increase among youths , and for
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 to have a better life ,
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 has to explore other
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's
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 in other to enhance their livelihood.
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, due to the insecurity crisis, some individuals feel that travelling to another man's land is the only option to fighting against it. In my opinion, the acquisition of a foreign language is a necessity because
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 will help us reshape our various lifestyles and improve our way of communication with other
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such
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 as France, India and some European
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,
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 will decrease unemployment
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, eradicating poverty among nations.
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, learning
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 cultures enhances bilingual, with
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people
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 can communicate without being biased. In summary, Learning foreign languages enhances proper communication between
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 another. And
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 improves the country's economic growth.
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