With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be oppened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Due to

the higher demands of fossil fuels, a certain segment of individuals

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that we must explore the untouched destinations of the earth in search of energy sources. Though there is a number of supporters of

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affirmation, I stand against

this

and the following paragraphs of

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essay will analyze two factors which contribute to my opinion.

To begin

with, exploring virgin territories may outcome to double the environmental pollution.

As a result

of the complex mechanisms that we use to extract oil from the fossils, we have already created a number of problems in nature.

For example

, a recent documentary programme which was telecasted on the Discovery Channel revealed

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an American oil pump resulting in to increase in the temperature in the sea waters, and now it has an effect melting down the glaciers at the North

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.

Hence

, if we use the existing technologies to explore untouched destinations, that will definitely outcome in polluting nature.

Secondly

, these invasions will destroy the unidentified creatures who live in these areas.

For instance

, there was a report in the international media, about a hydropower plant, in Mexico that resulted in the destruction of a number of indigenous creatures who lived around that area. If it can happen in Mexico, there is no doubt that it will not happen in the alien soils.

Therefore

, we must not consider exploring these grounds for

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of our future generations.

To conclude

, I reiterate that we must not destroy unexplored areas in

searching

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for

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fuel as it will result

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double the environmental pollution and the extinction of unknown animals.

Instead

of doing these, we must put our efforts

to find

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more alternative eco-friendly energy sources to protect our mother nature.