More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answers and include examples relevant to your experience.

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. Along with increasing social media use,

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provoked to follow the trends. Looking from the negative perspective, the effects of

this

phenomenon consist of wasting

money

, showing their economic level, increasing competition, and covetousness, which are inevitable.

Firstly

, advertising has always been trying to induce

people

to buy trendy

clothes

and

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profiteering .

Thus

it leads to wasting

money

, and it is one reason that would cause consumerism.

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costly brands

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converted into

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of property which showing of them would sharpen the class distinction.

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and will have more competition sense that it can seem bad effect.

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I went to school, the most of students had bought

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Nike shoes, but I cannot afford to buy

it

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. After

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I was isolated for a long time. With regards to positive view,

firstly

wearing trendy

clothes

enhance the aesthetics aspects of city and gathering because of sharp

colors

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.

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young

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generation

have

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always been keeping themselves

update

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,

hence

this

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can attract their adventure-seeking spirit. Seeing

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phenomenon from another angle, turning

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into a hobby leads to boosting creativity and will bring a lot of new

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design

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the

clothes

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.

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clothes

designer

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designers

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are provoked to introduce new products

and

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they

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will meet the latent needs of

people

. As

result

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the infrastructure of

clothes

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industry is intensifying, and these reasons

encompasses

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earning more

money

, more job opportunities and creating a window of

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prospect

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. To conclude, for the time being buying new design customs have been increased and

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begs the question, the positive side

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in fact outweigh

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is no. on the one hand, there is no doubt that moving to trendy and fashionable

clothes

have

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good

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effect on society via making more

money

, respond the new

people

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needs.

On the other hand

profiteering and showing off

the

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expensive

clothes

are

strong

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reason

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argument

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with

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this

phenomenon.