in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Hardworking and perseverance are cultural

values

in some countries. So parents find it precious to teach these

values

to their

children

. Some people believe that encouraging kids to work hard has several advantages while others argue that its drawbacks

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far more. In

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essay, both viewpoints will be discussed. On the one hand, many commentators justifiably maintain that giving the message to

children

that hardworking is a way of achieving your goals has a lot of benefits.

Firstly

,

children

should be learned that obtaining what they want requires some

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. It means that they have to try to reach their ambitions. It is a useful lesson for them when they want to enter

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society as they are more likely to overcome difficulties in real life.

Besides

, they are less likely to suffer from failing

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to the fact that they believe that failure is the bridge to victory.

On the other hand

, there are those who subscribe to the view that there are some negative points in setting hardworking as a necessary condition for achieving goals. They assert that

this

message may lead to misleading

children

in choosing

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. In the other words, they might not find their talents because they learn to hard work even in fields

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they have no interest

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parents or society dictate them to do them. They

also

claim that

children

should enjoy their childhood and forcing them for doing more

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opportunity. In South Korea

for instance

, the rate of suicide among teenagers is high due to the university entrance exam which

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them study too hard. In conclusion,

values

like being diligent have merits and drawbacks simultaneously. It is important for parents to take

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full

advantages

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of these

values

by making a balance in different aspects of their kids’ lives.