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Some people fail at school but end up being successful in life.Why do you think this is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

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Some people become successful in their
life
 even if they could not perform well
at
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 academic skills.I think there are a number of reasons that need to be considered to develop an incredible
life
 rather than focusing only on
school
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 curriculum. In
this
 essay ,I will discuss factors that contribute to
build
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 a successful
life
 in the following paragraphs. A successful
life
 is created by following
a
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well-disciplined planning and freedom to chase one's dream.In the current scenario, most
of
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the
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parents strictly force their children to mug up textbooks rather than
encouraging
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 them to focus on subjects that make them improve
skills
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their skills
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.Because most of these people
believes
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 that one can be successful only when their child
get
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gets
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 desired scores on exams , admission
in
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 a reputed college and a good job in a multinational company. Ultimately ,these children fail to express their opinions or get the courage to choose the pathway that
boost
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 their abilities. To illustrate, In India,many college students are fearful to take Arts or Sports as a main even though they are
skillful
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, as they think that selecting them may ruin their career.
On the other hand
, there are several factors through which a person can gain success in his
life
.
First
 of all, every
students
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 have to be determined on a goal which can make them a perfect person. Once they achieve a deep knowledge and practice on
this
 specific skill ,they can become very talented and make a career out of it.To illustrate, the popular
kpop
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pop
K-pop
 band known as BTS became famous
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worldwide
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world wide
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worldwide
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.The leader of
this
 group RM is an intelligent young man
followed
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 his passion to become a musician despite
of
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considering his high IQ levels.His hard work and dedication
towards
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 music made him popular among music lovers.
Secondly
, children should
taught
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 to be face failures
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in spite
inspite
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in spite
 of running away from all the problems in their
life
.If they are not capable of doing
this
,
life
 would
turned
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 out more miserable. To conclude, successful
life
 is a result of daringness to follow the dream and
courage
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 to make failures
ad
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as
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 stepping stones to achieve a dream.
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