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Many people migrate from rural to urban areas. What are the benefits and limitations.

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Nowadays the relocation of people from villages to non-rural places is relevant.
This
 essay will discuss the pros and cons of
this
 question.
First
 of all, cities are really convenient for people to live in since there are a lot of facilities to develop, communicate or even study. The fact is government always solves the problem of towns due to the fact that it is densely populated areas.
For example
, there is a big range of jobs or schools where you can choose what is more suitable for you. There are,
however
,
also
 some disadvantages to migrating from the countryside.
Although
 urban life offers more conveniences for human beings, for the sake of health villages are the best place to live. Residents of rural communities consume mostly organic foods without any artificial additives.
For example
, they even can grow vegetables and fruits themselves whereas townsmen cannot make the same and buy products from stores, which may be inorganic and harmful. As the consequence, they can get not good physical condition. Eventually, there are always enough arguments for the benefits and drawbacks of living in the cities.
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