You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

#team #sport #friends #week #member #accident #wasn’t #weekend #match #friend #conditions

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Ravi, Hope

this

Linking Words

letter finds you well and I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter with mixed emotions as you are recovering well sooner than expected which is really great to hear.

However

Linking Words

, we decided to play the

last

Linking Words

match without and

finally

Linking Words

we had a nail-biting match with trumpet victory. As you know, upsides and downsides in our

team

Use synonyms

and we struggled a lot all the way to come out of a critical situation despite

team

Use synonyms

members back to back injuries.

Therefore

Linking Words

, at the end of the match, we got a mesmerizing goal which put us into

first

Linking Words

place on the board. I felt

this

Linking Words

was one of the best matches I played ever in my life.

In addition

Linking Words

team

Use synonyms

member support and mindblowing performance with spectacular goals are really eye feasts to the entire stadium and crowded too.

Last

Linking Words

but not least I missed your company during the match which I did not even think about in my dreams. I hope you will come out of bed very soon and we will have a nice match again with our all

team

Use synonyms

members. Cannot wait anymore to play the game with you and take care. Best regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Wed Aug 24 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The debate over the importance of various school subjects is ongoing, with some recommending History due to its role in understanding our past, while others underline Science and Technology as crucial for navigating the modern world. Both perspectives reflect differing priorities.
5
band
Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We cannot deny the fact that the number of people who prefer to work and study from their places is increasing. In my opinion this step will affect the population and also govrenments positivley in order to save money and time. this essay will discuss the advantages clearly.
4
band
Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, peoples are loving travel, In our busy life visiting places give more mind relax and happy. Part of the people decide small areas go to visit, another part of people go to tour different areas such sahara desert or Antarctic. They decide based on their money and mindset. When we decide go to different areas that will give advantages and drawbacks. Following paragraph that will discuss.
<4
band
Many people have lost their job as a result of covid-19 pandemic. What can the government and individuals do to solve d problem.
A lot of people no more having a job to do when in the spread of the Covid 19virus. The responsibility of government is to initiate its by organising all the health professionals to bring it the contro.
<4
band
Nowadays, people make new friends using social media and internet chat groups. Some of them believes that is good. Other people thinks that face-to-face conversation is beneficial. Discuss both sides
In this present world, a lot of people using social media and internet chat group looking for new friend it could be say without realize much of certain benefit use social media in this era and people each other think be better face to face in reality life, im totally the both view has positive impact and negatife impact so that i would like highlight the both view in paragraph below.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Many people have lost their job as a result of covid-19 pandemic. What can the government and individuals do to solve d problem.

Nowadays, people make new friends using social media and internet chat groups. Some of them believes that is good. Other people thinks that face-to-face conversation is beneficial. Discuss both sides