Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The notion concerning the difference between the thinking of today's

generation

and old ones seems to trigger a considerable debate. An opinion in

this

regard, put forward by a cluster of like-minded people, is that the instructions set by old persons must be followed by the youngsters. Others,

however

, do not follow the suit and believe that it is in the nature of teens to contradict the thoughts of older ones. I entirely agree with the former statement. The proponents of the former statement assert that they should follow old persons because they not only have vast experience of life but

also

have

ability

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to deal with many issues. To be clearer, the previous

generation

always sets a number of examples for the new

generation

not to repeat the same mistake.

Therefore

, just by looking into

such

matters new generations can survive in their bad periods. Tata motors- an Indian automobile giant,

for instance

, was about to bankrupt when the new

generation

started introducing new concepts, later, by following the instructions of Rana Tata, founder of Tata, it gained its position in the market again. Others,

nevertheless

, feel teens always follow their own rules while challenging previous generations because of their immaturity. To be precise, adolescents often feel more confident and smarter than others, especially grey-haired persons, because of immaturity and high energy level; meanwhile, they forget to listen to their older ones.

Consequently

, youngsters end up often to a huge loss; they find it hard to accept

such

unfavourable circumstances. A piece of advice, from an old aged known, in

such

harsh

conditions

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could help someone to regain confidence and rise up, as the Sun rises in the dawn after dusk. In conclusion, older people have vast experience of life

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therefore

their saying could help the new

generation

to work hard and overcome

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hard times. Undoubtedly, their new technological advancements could help in development.