Some high schools require all students to wear uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school politics de you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Nowadays, many
schools
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have politics among them.They compete
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other in different
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and
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are the main features who represent their high
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of their competitors is
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.Some
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high
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schools
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order
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to wear whatever they want and other high
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assume to water uniforms strictly.In
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rules and choose
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of them.
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of all,
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should be away from these Harch activities because
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are the biggest domestic place where
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achieve their goals.The pupils are not enough intelligent to admire the things that are going to happen
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them.
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just
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focus on competition with the other
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.They compete with each other on every platform.
One
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of the competitions is
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.
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, Different
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institutes have different rules and regulations.Those
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who decided to wear anything whatever you the
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like doing
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a cheap motel.The
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is the
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thing
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a sign of
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.Every student should be a
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perfectly whatever of which educational department they
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to.
Uniform
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is the
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thing that can realize the student what you are and what the purpose you come in that place.Those
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school
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make a decision of wearing
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strictly because
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plays an important role in the field of
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.For ,example in different ,towns many parents wish that their child wear
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uniform
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a uniform
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likewise
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to the other pupil but their
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does not allow them .
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is ridiculous thinking for whom the
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and they left the
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. In summary,
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uniform
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is a significant thing in the
education
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system.
Students
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should wear uniforms
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the other high
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school's
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order to wear them.
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