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Some high schools require all students to wear uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school politics de you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Nowadays, many
schools
 have politics among them.They compete
each
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 other in different
Activities
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 and
students
 are the main features who represent their high
school
.
One
 of their competitors is
uniform
.Some
the
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high
schools
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school's
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 order
students
 to wear whatever they want and other high
schools
 assume to water uniforms strictly.In
this
 essay,I will explain the difference between both high
school
 rules and choose
one
 of them.
First
 of all,
schools
 should be away from these Harch activities because
schools
 are the biggest domestic place where
students
 achieve their goals.The pupils are not enough intelligent to admire the things that are going to happen
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them.
Schools
just
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must
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 focus on competition with the other
school
 .They compete with each other on every platform.
One
 of the competitions is
uniform
.
Likewise
, Different
education
 institutes have different rules and regulations.Those
schools
 who decided to wear anything whatever you the
students
 like doing
such
 a cheap motel.The
uniform
 is the
one
 thing
that is
 a sign of
education
.Every student should be a
uniform
 perfectly whatever of which educational department they
belongs
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 to.
Uniform
 is the
one
 thing that can realize the student what you are and what the purpose you come in that place.Those
school
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make a decision of wearing
uniform
 strictly because
uniform
 plays an important role in the field of
education
.For ,example in different ,towns many parents wish that their child wear
uniform
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a uniform
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likewise
 to the other pupil but their
school
 does not allow them .
This
 is ridiculous thinking for whom the
students
 and they left the
school
. In summary,
the
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uniform
 is a significant thing in the
education
 system.
Students
 should wear uniforms
likewise
 the other high
school's
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schools
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 order to wear them.
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