Some criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are set free. Reasons and solutions

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crimes even when they are set free

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society. It happens for a variety of reasons.

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a number of criminals tend to kill people after

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reason is increasingly linked to an uncontrollable power of disgust and greed inside them that comes from an

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way of spreading the resources of the Earth ,and the style and place of upbringing. A good instance

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is Alexis Flores guy who killed almost five hundred people. If people listen carefully

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guy which clearly explains the reason behind the 500 casualties. Another contributing factor is

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root of every evil. The shortage of

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guides them to an inevitable mental breakdown which makes them not feel a part of society ,so they found killing someone as

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revenge

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humanity when they

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. The reason is that if one’s mind is programmed to commit a crime from early

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no force in the world can stop that but

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problem. Serial killers can do prison

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to help society, itself. It would be better if the judges give

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when it comes to serial killers.

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cheap skyscrapers but

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diminish the number of casualties.

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, the astonishing skyscrapers of China are built by prisoners,

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is a country where victims of killers are less than average.

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, it is hard to teach an old dog new tricks ,

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, we still can alter their mindset with

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and psychology. The research on psychology named “Inside the criminals’ brains” depicts that even there is

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good in bad ,and with that

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they changed hundreds of criminals’ lives forever. To conclude, the problem of committing crime after release will not be solved unless they either worked

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proper

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psychological help.