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Some children spend hours every day on smartphones. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#children #hours #smartphones #development
Nowadays many
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schools conducting regular classes
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online due to the pandemic.
This
 leads all the
children
 got the situation like that they should
definetly
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 have a mobile phone on their own. I strongly agree that positive effect
overwiegh
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overweigh
overweight
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children
 who
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 their mobile phone an hour approximately on a daily basis. There are many good
thing
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of
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 using the smartphone
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especially
especaily
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especially
 for the younger generation.
First
 of
all
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 they are easily upgrading themselves by using the internet. For
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instance
intance
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,
children
 have many
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 to learn about upcoming
varies
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 technologies just by using their
smartphones
.
Other
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 thing is that
children
 doing the
assingments
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assignments
, groups discussion and clearing their doubts with other friends very easily.
Lastly
,
smartphones
helps
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 them to keep
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by
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 the inbuilt music
appilcations
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applications
, games, books and podcasts.
However
, there are
few
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 disadvantages of using
smartphones
such
 as violent
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websites,cyber crimes,
online
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gamblings
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.
this
 may
disattract
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distract
 the young
children
. To summarize
this
 topic, As
i
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 mentioned earlier that using
smartphone
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are
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 unavoidable. Parents can let the
children
 have their own
phone
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phones
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, but they should keep track
them
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about
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 the activity that they are doing
in
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the
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smartphones
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