Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience

Some individuals believe hosting

a global games

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a global game

global games

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is beneficial while others think it has more drawbacks than benefits.

Although

hosting

an international events

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an international event

international events

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can be costly.

However

,in my

opinion

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it is good for the nation because it

secure

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secures

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inflows of foreign capital and

generate

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generates

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employment. Some people think that countries holding a major sports event is advantageous because

this

could help secure inflows of overseas investment. Hosting athletic events attracts some investors and

this

boost

the nations economy

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the nation's economy

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and

also

generate

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generates

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employment opportunities for the

country

and its

neighboring

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neighbouring

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countries.

For example

,the FIFA World Cup

that is

going to be held in Doha in November

this

year is expected to boost Qatar and its

region

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region's

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economy. Billions of dollars are being invested in infrastructures of the stadium,metro system, airport and

a

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apply

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seaport,

this

has led to an increase in employment for Qatar and

it

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its

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neighbouring countries.

However

,some individual has a contrary opinion, they think hosting a foreign game is bad for the

host

country

.

This

might be because of the cost involved in preparing, evaluating and even

in

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apply

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hiring consultants,

this

is usually done before a

country

is even

choosing

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chosen

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,after the Nation is chosen, it is Paramount for the

country

to find a large venue to

host

the ceremonies and upgrade all sports facilities.

Also

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there is

need

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a need

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to build new hotels,construction of new roads,railways and

airport

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airports

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,

this

cost a lot of money which runs in billions and

this

may have

a deleterious effects

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a deleterious effect

deleterious effects

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on the

host

country

. Even today,Rio De Janeiro is trying to overcome the economic problems it encountered after the 2016 Summer

Olympic

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Olympics

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. In conclusion,

although

it is expensive to

host

an international

sport

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sports

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event.

However

,it is good for the

country

because it attracts foreign investment which

boost

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boosts

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it

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its

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economy and it

also

provide

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provides

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jobs for its citizens.