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do you think parents should encourage children follow their sport career

#parents #children #sport #career
Nowadays,kids take up various subjects and are growing up well with
it
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them
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.They no longer take up stem courses like mostly science,arts or commerce for graduating.Different outdoor
activities
 like cricket,football and
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basketball
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basket ball
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basketball
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 are taken up by children as their future
career
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.According to my
opinion
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 parents should never force upon their subject preference over
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their
thier
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their
 youngsters.They must always push them to choose their own favourite subject. Various newer diseases are developing within our
body
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 at a very early age.Life expectancy
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 decreased from 80 to 65 years in our generations.
As a result
,awareness regarding sports and other
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extracurricular
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extra curricular
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extracurricular
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activities
 must be made mandatory and compulsory by the
regulatories
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regulators
 worldwide. Taking up games and physical
activities
 including swimming,rowing,weight-lifting and rock-climbing encourages others to take up health
activities
 as a part of their employment.Many
sportsperson
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 successful today,have once taken up
such
 activity as a part of their full-time commitment.
However
,upcoming forms of Health fitnesses and
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exercises
exersices
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exercises
such
 as
zumba
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,
aerobics
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and aerobics
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 have become an important form of employment for many dancers.Famous cricketers including Sachin Tendulkar and Sourav Ganguly
motivates
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 the younger generation to
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take
the
tae
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take
 up sports as a part of their future desperately.
Therefore
,taking up sports as a profession is highly
appreciating
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 these days.If a youth is passionate enough to take it up as an occupation and go along with it for the rest of his life,his guardians must be supportive and encouraging.
This
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,
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 will help them to chase their dreams. Eventually, they will achieve them easily no matter how hard it is to make it happen.
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