Some students work while studying Give me advantages and disadvantages
At present, a number of students prefer to work while studying.
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negative effects and Linking Words
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essay will discuss these issues briefly.
It can't be denied that doing part-time jobs is a hugely beneficial thing for an adolescent especially when he does it while studying. Linking Words
For instance
, a youngster can realize his responsibilities to his family and society during employment which can help them to be more responsible in future. Linking Words
Moreover
, youngsters can get experience that can help them to get their desired job as some companies required experience. Linking Words
In addition
, they can understand the value of money, if they started working as soon as possible. Linking Words
Furthermore
, they can help themselves financially by doing jobs during studying because at that time they don't have to take money from their family. Linking Words
As a result
, they can be independent earlier.
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On the contrary
, as everything has merits with a lot of demerits, Linking Words
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also
several drawbacks. Linking Words
For example
, doing work while studying can divert people’s minds from their studies because at that time their thinking will be like; how they will be self-dependent fast. Linking Words
Thus
they will fail to understand what should they give priority Linking Words
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which can be more dangerous to their better career. Linking Words
Additionally
, they can involve in crimes as they have easy access to money. Linking Words
For example
, they can easily go to places where they shouldn't go as well as they can addict to drugs.
In conclusion, students should do work but definitely, they should give more focus on studies than employment.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...