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Some people say that the educational success of a student is the result of the work of a good teacher.Other says it depends on the charscter of the student.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #success #student #work #teacher #charscter
Some pupils say that the schooling success of
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 undergraduate is the result of the work
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good tutor. On one hand,education is the most important part of our life tutor have
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 main role in student life because they have a full of
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knowledge
.They provide
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good skills to our students.
For instance
,when
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 was in 5th standard
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 was very confused
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 my chemistry subject that time my tutor gave me
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 for how we learn in
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 way.
On the other hand
,few people say that it
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 on the character of the student.
Teacher
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 do a good
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performance
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performance
 in
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the class
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class room
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 but some students don't pay attention.They chit-chat with each other.
Moreover
,some students learning skills are not too good.They try to do beat but they can't learn properly. To conclude,
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 think that
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teacher
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 role is most important in student life.
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