You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object. Write at least 150 words. Model Answer

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Dear Joe, I am writing to say thank you for your invitation. During the stay

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week, my son Tom was having so much fun with your son, and Martha and I were

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taking a break. We played monopoly and had a nice time chatting with you and your wife. I definitely want it again soon. Let's find a place where the kids can drain their energy on their own and we can take turns to look after them. Meanwhile, the others can chat and take a rest. When we returned home I found a few of the monopoly cards were in the big plastic bag in which we brought our toys. I guess it must be the kids making a mistake when they were told to clean up their own mess. I think we can find a time to meet again and I will bring back the cards to you. By the way, Tom is always mentioning he wants to play with Timmy again, let's make

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happen soon. I am looking forward to hearing what your plans are. Best wishes, Martin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

184 words

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