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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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In the current century, due to the population leap and urbanization, there has been
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 of waste materials in every part of the world. While a lot of countries adopt recycling methods to reduce environmental impact, there are still many countries that hardly recycle their refuse, but
instead
, they dumped everything into landfill.
This
 essay will discuss why
this
 might be the case and how to alleviate
this
 problem. The
first
 reason for the absence of recycling in a country is mainly due to the government not adopting official programmes about how garbage should be
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Therefore
,
people
 generally do not aware of the importance of recycling their refuse. To tackle
this
 situation, the government should adopt the best plan possible in accordance with their situation and encourage
people
 to recycle. Starting with explaining to the public what economic and environmental benefits we can have if we recycle in some correct ways.
This
 can be done via flyers being delivered to each house and advertising on television or radio. The
second
 reason is because of the inconvenience
people
 have to go through. The lack of space, particularly at home, is an example of inconvenience. Recycling means having to separate bins for segregating different rubbish and, understandably some
people
 have neither time nor the will to put extra effort. For
this
 problem, the government has to make recycling as easy as possible. On the streets, recycling bins should be placed following each general rubbish bin,
hence
,
people
 do not need to drop their reusable garbage somewhere
further
 than normal garbage disposal. In conclusion,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • apathy
  • environmental impact
  • passive attitude
  • recycling infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • accessible
  • disposing
  • awareness
  • participate
  • incentivizing
  • motivate
  • tangible
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