The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
sodium
, saturated fat, and added sugars in standard meals in the USA:
breakfast
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, lunch,
dinner
, and
snacks
. At first glance, the highest proportion of the pie charts is
sodium
at
dinner
with
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at
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43%
while
sodium
at
snacks
and
breakfast
is contrasted with 14%. Plus, the percentage of saturated fat at
dinner
is lower than
sodium
at 37%;
however
, it is still the highest on the saturated fat pie
chart
. Both
breakfast
and
snacks
have the approximately same trend on the
chart
.
In addition
,
snacks
are at a peak with 42% on the added sugar
chart
,
while
the rest of the
chart
is not different significantly.
Consequently
, the ft and sugar are the same trends at 16% at lunch and there is a huge difference between the 3 substances at
dinner
with
sodium
(43%), fat (37%), and sugar (23%). In general, one can see that
breakfast
is the most healthy meal and has a low ratio of these three substances
while
snacks
and
dinner
are the opposite.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, breakfast, dinner, snacks, chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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