Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a large amount of

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in food and drinks sold in shops, which leads to a range of health problems.

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, some think that the prices of these products should be lifted up so that

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will buy less of these things. And I partly agree with

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opinion. To start with, it is necessary to consume less

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, so some measures should be imposed.

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, eating too much

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will probably lead to some illnesses

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as obesity, diabetes and high blood pressure, and if

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do not care about their diets, more problems will happen in their physical health.

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, making sugary products more expensive seems to be a method to keep

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away from these goods because they may reckon that spending more money on buying snacks and drinks is not a great deal.

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,

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will contributes to the reduction of individuals' sugary consumption.

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, I think there are other effective means for

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to consume less

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but not just raise the cost of purchasing relevant goods. Compared to

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method, improving the awareness and habit of healthy eating,

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, is more useful.

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is wrong that individuals should not take in any

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because it is the main source of energy that

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need to maintain their physical functioning, so giving products at higher prices is not wise. What the public should do is consume

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plausibly to keep a balanced diet,

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of buying it less. In conclusion, I do believe the public should purchase less

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in order to reduce the risk of getting some physical problems, but making the cost more is not enough. That means that more efforts should be taken to help individuals live a healthy life with

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, not without it.