Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a large amount of
sugar
in food and drinks sold in shops, which leads to a range of health problems.
As a result
, some think that the prices of these products should be lifted up so that
people
will buy less of these things. And I partly agree with
this
opinion. To start with, it is necessary to consume less
sugar
, so some measures should be imposed.
For example
, eating too much
sugar
will probably lead to some illnesses
such
as obesity, diabetes and high blood pressure, and if
people
do not care about their diets, more problems will happen in their physical health.
Hence
, making sugary products more expensive seems to be a method to keep
people
away from these goods because they may reckon that spending more money on buying snacks and drinks is not a great deal.
Consequently
,
this
will contributes to the reduction of individuals' sugary consumption.
On the other hand
, I think there are other effective means for
people
to consume less
sugar
but not just raise the cost of purchasing relevant goods. Compared to
this
method, improving the awareness and habit of healthy eating,
for instance
, is more useful.
This
is wrong that individuals should not take in any
sugar
because it is the main source of energy that
people
need to maintain their physical functioning, so giving products at higher prices is not wise. What the public should do is consume
sugar
plausibly to keep a balanced diet,
instead
of buying it less. In conclusion, I do believe the public should purchase less
sugar
in order to reduce the risk of getting some physical problems, but making the cost more is not enough. That means that more efforts should be taken to help individuals live a healthy life with
sugar
, not without it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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