Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible, while others believe that children should go to school when they are at least seven years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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for all parents. I think all views
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. The people say that
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think have a job,
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school to feel safe for their
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babayseater. The other people
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have separation anxiety, and they have
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