Theoretical subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are taught in universities but students prefer more practical subjects such as accounting and computer programming. Some people believe theoretical subjects should be abandoned in universities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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At present, an increasing number of people are concerned about
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theoretical courses, say
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and philosophy, should not
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be educated in universities as numerous students are willing to study practical
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, like accounting and economics. From my perspective, I think both of them should coexist. On the one hand, theoretical
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are
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essential part
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studying and living.
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, it contributes to
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of knowledge and logical thinking ability, particularly
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accounting which requires basic skills
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mathematic
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. If students do not acquire the ability
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and solving complex problems, it would be difficult for them to learn difficult knowledge
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, theoretical lessons affect students gain insight into the world and the way of seeing problems
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matter to their lives.
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classical questions of philosophy, ”who are you”, ”where are you from”, everyone’s answer is different. But those advantages are uneasy to be embodied in Practical
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. So theoretical
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cannot be abandoned.
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practical objects are extending of theoretical courses and have a positive effect on graduates’ future. As they have obtained the basic skill that companies need so there are a lot of advantages for them when
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a job.
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accounting
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requires
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strong ability
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and handling information while graduates already
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, so they are more capable of working out creative solutions whenever they spot matters. Apart from the benefits of
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, it
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plays a key role in their daily since they have to build
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lives in all
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aspects
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,
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as saving money or
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for
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future projects, In
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situation, the role of economics cannot be ignored.
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contrast, above of all advantages rarely exist in theoretical
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,
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practical lessons
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need to be taught. In conclusion, I believe that both of them are significant and the universities have
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to find some way to keep
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balance
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instead
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of
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