Write about the following topic. Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Education
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plays a vital role in everybody's life. Some communities say that teachers should not give any
homework
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to their
children
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while some other communities argue with
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matter and say that
homework
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is mandatory for
children
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in their
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. In
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essay, I will discuss both scenarios and
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I will give my opinion on
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matter. On the one side, If students are not given any
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, they will do some activities like playing games, watching TV, etc.
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,
children
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are spending most of their time in schools for their
education
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so some people are thinking that it is better to not give any
homework
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and allow the
children
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to spend their spare time with some activities. Nowadays, Parents are encouraging their
children
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to participate in other activities rather than studies like singing, dancing, etc.
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, If a child has an interest in both
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and singing
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it is good to spend his/her time singing after school. On the other side,
Homework
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is important in
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. Because
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Children
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will peruse their subject by doing the
homework
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. By doing
homework
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children
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will gain empirical
knowledge
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. In some countries,
children
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are given
homework
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as their punishment because teachers have no right to punish the
children
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physically. In
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way,
children
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will follow some rules
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they will flout.
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,
children
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can develop their
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by doing things practically rather than theoretically. To sum up, In my view I agree with the latter statement because without
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and projects
children
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will not get any empirical
knowledge
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. It is important to examine their subject and get a brief
knowledge
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of their subject. It is possible with
homework
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and projects.
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