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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you thiink advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #interaction #people #society #thiink
Nowadays many
people
 prefer to use
internet
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 for conversation
instead
 of
do
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 it
offline
. Despite
this
 habit has it is own lacks, in my opinion, positive factors overbalance them. To start with, thanks to social
networks
people
 can stay in touch practically everywhere in the world. Many
people
 become friends at
the
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 early age
,
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 when they study in school or University. Before the epoch of social
networks
, these contacts were often lost, when
people
 move to different cities or countries after
the
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graduation.
In contrast
 to
this
, now
people
 can not only speak to each other online
,
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 but
also
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photo
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 and
video
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 of their life without
offline
 meetings.
This
 opportunity definitely helps
people
 to stay closer.
Secondly
, social
networks
 created
simpler
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opportunity
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opportunities
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 for interaction. Despite the fact, that many
of
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people
 still like to meet each other
offline
 to make
a
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dinner or have any
offline
 activities,
social
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 network is
great
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 addition to these meetings.
People
 discuss plans, order a place for
meeting
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,
compare
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and compare
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 their
schedule
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schedules
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 through
the
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social
networks
. After the meeting friends can share their
photo
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photos
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 and
impessions
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impressions
impression
. Social
networks
 did not create to change face-to-face interaction. They only add it. To conclude, social
networks
 gave great opportunities for
people
 interact to
each
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 other without face-to-face meetings. They allow
people
 to stay in contact everywhere and everywhen. Despite the fact, that nowadays some
people
 do not pay enough attention to
offline
meeting
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meetings
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preffering
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preferring
 online friends, from my point of view, social
networks
 did our life more convenient than ever.
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